Okay, not a finished work. Something I'm working on for a project. Thought I throw it out there.
Copyright @ Roscoe James 2008
A little bit you
A little bit me
A little bit love
A little bit we
A little bit time
A little bit place
A little bit us
A little bit space
Like a river we will run
Like a song we will be sung
Like a bell that must be rung
Like a morning in the sun
A kiss on my lips
A touch on my cheek
A sigh in my ear
I hope it’s for keeps
A little bit you
A little bit me
A little bit love
A little bit we
A little bit time
A little bit place
A little bit us
A little bit space
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7 comments:
i like that RJ! Is it going to be a song? Seems very lyrical... I can almost hear the music.
(hips swaying before i trip and fall on my ass.)
You caught me. Actaully, I'm working on order (these are just a bunch of lines) and verse. I have one and have two ideas for chorus up there. It will go in a book.
Subtle and sweet lullabypoem. Cool.
I definitely heard music in my head. Loved these lines best:
"Like a river we will run
Like a song we will be sung"
Great poem. Very cool.
Everyone's being kind but I'll take it! I'll update it here as I change it cause it's far from done. Thanks.
Is it a song? It seems like that to me!
numbing nirvana
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