tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469103501055026352.post8792808732781198860..comments2023-05-12T06:17:22.714-06:00Comments on Roscoe James: Poetry Train MondayRoscoe Jameshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08902338458122913172noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469103501055026352.post-39031517246268326462008-03-18T11:00:00.000-06:002008-03-18T11:00:00.000-06:00Is it a song? It seems like that to me!numbing nir...Is it a song? It seems like that to me!<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/03/numbing-nirvana-read-write-poemmonday.html" REL="nofollow">numbing nirvana</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469103501055026352.post-64085398723880348502008-03-17T23:00:00.000-06:002008-03-17T23:00:00.000-06:00Everyone's being kind but I'll take it! I'll upda...Everyone's being kind but I'll take it! I'll update it here as I change it cause it's far from done. Thanks.Roscoe Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08902338458122913172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469103501055026352.post-88103577646688433262008-03-17T20:22:00.000-06:002008-03-17T20:22:00.000-06:00Great poem. Very cool.Great poem. Very cool.Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17968479919482739686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469103501055026352.post-81436881792966159492008-03-17T19:10:00.000-06:002008-03-17T19:10:00.000-06:00I definitely heard music in my head. Loved these l...I definitely heard music in my head. Loved these lines best:<BR/><BR/>"Like a river we will run<BR/>Like a song we will be sung"Julia Phillips Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469103501055026352.post-53598271579534052222008-03-17T16:26:00.000-06:002008-03-17T16:26:00.000-06:00Subtle and sweet lullabypoem. Cool.Subtle and sweet lullabypoem. Cool.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469103501055026352.post-51260847458066002542008-03-17T10:08:00.000-06:002008-03-17T10:08:00.000-06:00You caught me. Actaully, I'm working on order (th...You caught me. Actaully, I'm working on order (these are just a bunch of lines) and verse. I have one and have two ideas for chorus up there. It will go in a book.Roscoe Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08902338458122913172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2469103501055026352.post-61803319458215587742008-03-17T10:01:00.000-06:002008-03-17T10:01:00.000-06:00i like that RJ! Is it going to be a song? Seems ve...i like that RJ! Is it going to be a song? Seems very lyrical... I can almost hear the music.<BR/>(hips swaying before i trip and fall on my ass.)Rhianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17825362911575046105noreply@blogger.com